runner-up portfolios

 Video 1

a) Alyssa Schukar 
b) Sports and telling a story combined together.
c) Same distance in a lot of the photos, same feel & lens, majority of the photos don't have any emotion to them.
d) The photo of the girl falling over on the hurdle and the baseball celebration. 
e) I think she had some good pictures that show a lot but I do think on some of them they can be more up close and shot in different angles. 

Video 2

a) Josh Birnbaum 
b) Sports 
c) Angels and background need to be more understandable, nothing graphic about most of the photos, cropping pictures right and all are secondary pictures. 
d) The photo of the kids with all the paint, like how they are in the middle pf the action. The picture of the football guy tackling the opponent.  
e) I think he has good ideas to his pictures but he could've gotten closer and made photos that were in the moment.

Video 3 

a) Anthony Souffle 
b) A story of a bird and some fish. 
c) Basic photos, unusual stories trying to be told, basic angles and depth.  
d) Some photos look like they came out of a professional camera. 
e) I really don't know what was really going on in half of the photos and they all could've been better moments and shot in the right time. Also some of the pictures are ones that we see all over magazines.

Video 4

a) Melissa Golden
b) A story of a man getting sick
c) Out of focus, need to get to scenes faster to really tell what happened, basic photos and story
d) Portrait of a man really in focus nicely, good affection and moment shots.
e)  I like how in some photos she captured some moments that are great but again some basic photos and stories. She should've gotten closer and made shots a lot more better by getting personal.