Monday, April 23, 2018
merger photo preview
1) I think that not moving the camera at all and the lighting will be difficult to keep the same. Also to get the person in the right angles so the final picture will turn out the way I want it to.
2) The best place to shoot this would be in the front under the shade or somewhere with not an overwhelming light source.
3) In the photo maybe I can make all 5 different subjects to spell or do something unique.
4) If there was a theme to the photo then yes, but if it's just a merger photo probably not.
Wednesday, April 11, 2018
runner-up portfolios
Video 1
a) Alyssa Schukar
b) Sports and telling a story combined together.
c) Same distance in a lot of the photos, same feel & lens, majority of the photos don't have any emotion to them.
d) The photo of the girl falling over on the hurdle and the baseball celebration.
e) I think she had some good pictures that show a lot but I do think on some of them they can be more up close and shot in different angles.
Video 2
a) Josh Birnbaum
b) Sports
c) Angels and background need to be more understandable, nothing graphic about most of the photos, cropping pictures right and all are secondary pictures.
d) The photo of the kids with all the paint, like how they are in the middle pf the action. The picture of the football guy tackling the opponent.
e) I think he has good ideas to his pictures but he could've gotten closer and made photos that were in the moment.
Video 3
a) Anthony Souffle
b) A story of a bird and some fish.
c) Basic photos, unusual stories trying to be told, basic angles and depth.
d) Some photos look like they came out of a professional camera.
e) I really don't know what was really going on in half of the photos and they all could've been better moments and shot in the right time. Also some of the pictures are ones that we see all over magazines.
Video 4
a) Melissa Golden
b) A story of a man getting sick
c) Out of focus, need to get to scenes faster to really tell what happened, basic photos and story
d) Portrait of a man really in focus nicely, good affection and moment shots.
e) I like how in some photos she captured some moments that are great but again some basic photos and stories. She should've gotten closer and made shots a lot more better by getting personal.
winning portfolio
a) Good moments and right in the middle of actions.
b) I see that he did a good job of keeping the main focus in the photo and you can tell what each photo had going on I'd say the only weakness is that he could've gotten one or two different angle to get more in depth.
contest recap video
a) The judges look at how good the stories are and see if they have any feel to it. Photos have in depth moments and how well you can put in good pictures. Judges look for a good storyline and not just average photos. Journalism and Photography put as one in each picture.
pt 2 - individual images
1) I agree with the judges on the first action photo because it doesn't have a view and that it isn't dramatic and there's no feel to it. Also, that there's no originality to it, people have seen it before. The image is just a view, it could've had a better background, light, control.
2) I don't agree with the photo that has the two wrestling guys in because they have a spotlight on them and you can clearly tell what's about to happen. I don't think there could be another good angle.
Friday, April 6, 2018
final exam planning
1) I am aiming to shoot this weekend or next.
2) Where I shoot depends on what I choose to do, which will either be a grocery store and home or a whole day.
3) I want to make a type of food or show my entire day ay school.
4) A camera and maybe a tripod with a trigger.
5) I want to use the video portion when the making of the food is happening, the photo portion when I need to show what it's supposed to look like, and the narrator part when I explain what exactly is happening in the process.
Thursday, April 5, 2018
personal essays
1) Write about topics that will make people laugh or a controversial topic that everyone most likely has an opinion on.
2) Don't say things that make it sound great but to give your facts and reasons that, that something is right.
3) - Don't always start with "I", have construction to the sentences.
- Make connections to what you're talking about close to home or how it affects you and others.
- Grab the readers opinion with a question at the beginning or a statement that can relate to almost anyone reading the story.
opinions writing review: story 1
1) sumin Kim
2) Russia being banned from the Olympics
3) he agrees with the banishment that the IOC made.
4) yes, they explained how Russia responded all of this.
5) no, he was straight forward with his thoughts and facts.
6) yes
7) 1st & 3rd person
opinions writing review: story 2
1) Ian Miller
2) Apple draining batteries for new phones every year
3) he thinks they do it to promote their new phones.
4) nope
5) yes , he gave options of what apple could've done
6) nope
7) 1st & 2nd
opinions writing review: story 3
1) Katie Holme
2) Trends & Topics that need to stay in 2017
3) she has many thoughts that should stay in 2017 and feels highly about them
4) nope
5) she wasn't wishy-washy about anything
6) nope
7) 1st & 2nd
opinions writing review: story 4
1) Kiran Patel
2) Hollywood sexual abuse
3) "Victims must be heard and perpetrators must be punished."
4) No, this is a straight forward topic.
5) No they showed facts of why it's wrong and never changed their opinion.
6) No
7) 3rd person
A. I think a hard news story informs you and tells you a story of what happened. It also tells you direct facts and is based around people relevant to the story. A opinion story is one persons judgement towards a situation. The writer shows why they believe in what they do and usually have a concrete mind set about it.
B. I think there's not many photos because there isn't anything to show when you give your opinion and judgment to a story.
C. - Gun Laws
- President decisions
- Legalizing certain things.
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